Respect Susan's authority!

[TomFromNawlins]

I bet the suit Nesbit is a white guy, and he gets manhandled by a badass hispanic protecting an even more badass (POC?) female commander.

'Cause white guys in suits are the just the worst, am I right?

 

[LockedHDD__Pot]

I cant decide if his writing or his personality is worse

they're equally bad, since he doesn't have the creativity to wrote outside of his own personality

 

[AntSucks]

He's really one of the worst writers I've ever read, and I read a lot of pulp sci fi shit. I used to read Star Trek novelisations and even the worst were better written than this. There was a crossover with Xmen and Next Gen which was absolute garbage, but I'd read it again before I'd ever read another word by Fatty.

 

[guest]

Wow, every single character's dialogue is written in a manner similar to [email protected]'s writing style.

 

[guest]

He's really one of the worst writers I've ever read, and I read a lot of pulp sci fi shit. I used to read Star Trek novelisations and even the worst were better written than this. There was a crossover with Xmen and Next Gen which was absolute garbage, but I'd read it again before I'd ever read another word by Fatty.

Boy you must be a manly man with this admission.

 

[AntSucks]

Boy you must be a manly man with this admission.

No I'm a sci fi nerd faggot, just with some standards.

 

[CanISitOnJonsLap]

I do not dispute that, and I’m glad, even eager to be of whatever help to your efforts here that I can, so long as it’s within my authority to do so. And believe it or not, I do recognize the challenging position I’m putting you in, here. I’m sorry for that, but I’m the ranking military officer on station, and I can’t break operational security on just your say-so. This is a military matter, and I couldn’t tell you jack shit even if I wanted to. When Fleet Com gives you clearance, then I’ll be only too happy to open the logs to you. But until that happens, you’ll just have to wait.

Might as well face it you're addicted to commas

 

[guest]

Might as well face it you're addicted to commas

They remind Rick of curved negro cock Niki's bulls have.

 

[guest]

No I'm a sci fi nerd faggot, just with some standards.

OK, question could you reach home plate if you were throwing out a first pitch at a game, or are we getting some Obama level cluster fuck?

 

[TokenX]

Terrible.

 

[Random username]

That was Starship Repo, where Petey Rick was sexualizing a teenage female character, because of course he was.

Chris Chan's Sonichu comics were better written than this. They were simultaneously more believable, had more realistic dialog and better characterization, were more linear, and generally less of a beatdown to endure.

I am going to say it - Chris Chan is more likable and more talented overall than Petey Rick, aka Chris Chins.

Chris has better taste in women also.

 

[guest]

Might as well face it you're addicted to commas

Yeah no shit, that’s what I was going to say. Just a ridiculous amount of commas.

 

[DeadWithoutMyDavid]

Textbook Mary Sue:

Mary Sue - Wikipedia

en.wikipedia.org

 

[FLUUUID]

Textbook Mary Sue:

Mary Sue - Wikipedia

en.wikipedia.org

Yes but as long as a mary sue is a BIPOC or at least a Woman, thats fine. Obviously a Black woman is better than a white woman. Thats just basic.

 

[Ace Orenstein]

God damn this bit is dumb