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I'm not sure if it's been mentioned yet but the only review of The Scotty on Amazon is a five star review by Eric himself.

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The Scotty is so much fucking worse than anything Patrick ever wrote. It's not even hyperbole because hildy is so unlikeable. This is the first chapter. The character speaking is supposed to be a woman, but she talks like a 50 year old, bald man called Eric Hildeman. This novel does a whole lot to highlight Hildy's lack of life experience. Judging by this he's written more books than he's read and has never been outside or had a conversation with another human.

There's a lot to say about how shit this is. I kind of want to critique it just so I can post it here in its entirety but I would genuinely rather read Starship Repo again.
I only wish Hildy had written this under a pen name so i wouldnt have to have been made aware of it.
Nice setting your sci-fi story in a throwback, 20th century-style bar so you don't have to be creative, stupid.

Nice being a spy and the first person you see is your target who immediately starts divulging everything about himself before he learns your name, stupid.

"Stood out like a handful of sore thumbs" - How would you stand out if there were other, identical thumbs? Nice getting the point, stupid.

Nice detailed explanation of how some guy fixed a bug for a device that we dont care about yet in the opening 2 pages of your book, stupid.
 
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