M.M. Krill does not write well

[Raymond]

This is the first post from her blog: https://mmschill.com/page/2/

This is a community bit. Everyone is encouraged to join in.

 

[Mr-Wrinkle-Paws]

It just needs the big F circled grade

 

[GiveItAResto]

Great bit and there will be endless examples from those SFWA pedos.

My spelling and grammar is atrocious so I won't attempt it

 

[TheGhostOfAbeVigoda]

All these "writers" and "creatives" seem to be a bunch of C students at best.

I'm a retard too, but I never claimed to be anything more than a beloved pop culture icon and legend of the stage and screen.

 

[Raymond]

It just needs the big F circled grade

Done.

 

[Mr-Wrinkle-Paws]

Great bit and there will be endless examples from those SFWA pedos.

My spelling and grammar is atrocious so I won't attempt it

 

[FatPatsBaps]

All these "writers" and "creatives" seem to be a bunch of C students at best.

I'm a retard too, but I never claimed to be anything more than a beloved pop culture icon and legend of the stage and screen.

And a bunch of cunts at worst.

 

[AntSucks]

She has the same stretched out spacing between words that Pat had in his book because he forgot to format it correctly, and didn't have a real editor.

 

[Gay Faggot.]

I’d argue the “not much happening” instead of “not much is happening” isn’t a big deal anymore. Grammatically incorrect in a writing sense but modern vernacular has shifted it to being a norm. It would be like correcting “Irregardless”. It is technically not a word but people say it so much now it is. I also don’t understand the attempt at proper grammar if you’re so bad at it. Much like the pig. Mine’s not perfect but I have at least a basic understanding. Either way the F she earns is for Fat.

 

[Uncle Anthony Cumia]

Who’s homework was corrected better, Schill or Larry Sellers from The Big Lebowski?

 

[TheGhostOfAbeVigoda]

Who’s homework was corrected better, Schill or Larry Sellers from The Big Lebowski?

You're killing your father, Maggie.

 

[Uncle Anthony Cumia]

You're killing your father, Maggie.

Look Maggie, have you ever heard of Vietnam? You’re entering a world of pain Land Manatee.

 

[EraGodless]

This is the first post from her blog: https://mmschill.com/page/2/

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This is a community bit. Everyone is encouraged to join in.

Using red ink to grade a paper is a sign of aggression, child.

 

[Brooke Shields]

I’d argue the “not much happening” instead of “not much is happening” isn’t a big deal anymore. Grammatically incorrect in a writing sense but modern vernacular has shifted it to being a norm. It would be like correcting “Irregardless”. It is technically not a word but people say it so much now it is. I also don’t understand the attempt at proper grammar if you’re so bad at it. Much like the pig. Mine’s not perfect but I have at least a basic understanding. Either way the F she earns is for Fat.

Well let me ax you dis, why come grammar got so much more worse?

 

[Gay Faggot.]

Well let me ax you dis, why come grammar got so much more worse?

Only people can change grammar rules. Not animals.

 

[guest]

Just what we all needed, a new blog from an uneducated welfare queen in Jacksonville FL.