M.M. Krill does not write well (2/ - )

[Raymond]

 

[IGotATreeOnMyHouse85]

A storyteller? Not so. She just babbles about nothing for an audience of no one.

 

[Gay Faggot.]

This bitch does not understand commas. I think there’s a good chance, possibly even a great chance, that she’s retarded.

 

[IGotATreeOnMyHouse85]

Also, she’s claimed on twitter she’s not an artist that expects to be paid for her work but has no problem selling them / having a patreon. Sounds like she’s on some disability scam so that “income” doesn’t get reported.

 

[PeteRose]

This bitch does not understand commas. I think there’s a good chance, possibly even a great chance, that she’s retarded.

i dont understand, what you mean, the commas, seem fine, to me.

 

[TorquieTwoBeers]

You cut her some serious slack on that "Many of my peers. . ." sentence. This is a better way to say it:

"Many of my peers are published authors, either through traditional or self-publishing methods."

Removes the meaningless "well-published" adjective and the extraneous semicolon as well as simplifying the sentence. I couldn't make it much further than that as she is a terrible writer.

 

[Raymond]

I couldn't make it much further than that as she is a terrible writer.

That's why I seemed to have cut her slack. I didn't want to spend too much time on this bit. You'd have to rewrite the whole thing to make it a passable read. She writes like Little Carmine Lupertazzi speaks.

 

[GiveItAResto]

TYFYS

 

[Uncle Floyd]

i dont understand, what you mean, the commas, seem fine, to me.

I'm glad you're not in the Hall of Fame.

 

[Libby Son Of Loin]

She literally fucking wrote "Desk draw". Jesus I wonder how awful her fucking accent must be